Persuade us to consider your figure as the “greatest” human being who ever lived. Give is 3 reasons with evidence. Use persuasive language:
Many people will disagree, but I will prove everyone wrong. Why wouldn't Cleopatra be great? She was a great emperor and a powerful woman for her time. Three main reasons why she was great are: First she was very beautiful but stayed well mannered and didn't use it for her own good. Second, she was a great emperor and helped Egypt and the Egyptian people and last she had good marriages and 4 children. Although she did so many things at the same time, she stayed strong and never give up no matter what she had to go through. That's why I think she is great.
Many people will disagree, but I will prove everyone wrong. Why wouldn't Cleopatra be great? She was a great emperor and a powerful woman for her time. Three main reasons why she was great are: First she was very beautiful but stayed well mannered and didn't use it for her own good. Second, she was a great emperor and helped Egypt and the Egyptian people and last she had good marriages and 4 children. Although she did so many things at the same time, she stayed strong and never give up no matter what she had to go through. That's why I think she is great.
You had a lot of good reasons, but maybe you could have added a bit more. Other than that, great blog post!!!
ReplyDeleteBased on the reasons you listed above, Cleopatra seems like a very family type of woman who loved her family and friends dearly. I agree with you, she does seem like a great human being!
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