A Long Walk To Water
Linda Sue-Author
Pgs read-finished
So from where we left off he is walking with the group of people from his village. But after days of walking many more people that fled the fighting have joined the already enormous group. Hours turned into days and so many people have gathered up that there is no space for people to sleep. After exhausting walking the group had to rest so they went o sleep, but Salva was determined to find his family so he searched every night for one of his family members. But all of a sudden he hears "OUCH". A voice of a younger kid, maybe his age. The boy that he stepped on said "You have to be more careful". Then he said "My name is Marial". They shook hands and went to sleep. The next day was equally as hard and tediuos, but less boring with a friend by. Salva asked where they were going and Marial making an "L" shape with his fingers pointing to the sign the said "to Ethiopia"..
I WONT FINISH IT NOW TO KEEP IT MORE INTERESTING AND MAYBE START A SECOND STORY!
BRILLIANT!
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